Bike trip on Pacific Coast ~ Fourth week~

Bike trip on Pacific Coast ~ Fourth week~

My fourth week began from Santa Barbara. I cried with the guys I met the last day when I leave there left. Then I was going to San Diego. There is a very beautiful beach named Pacific Beach in this city. I saw a beautiful sunset and that was great time.










At this beach, I surfed for my first time. There are a lot of surfers and someone taught me how to surf. This time was great as well. Honestly, I wanted to stay here more than this time I had. 


Finally, I arrived Imperial Beach which is my final destination of this trip. Fortunately, we could see the sand art festival at this beach. The detail of this sculpture was very splendid. It's awesome!!



My trip finished in this city. Totally, tThis trip was very totally good amazing. I was am on cloud 9 now!!

Fourth week bike trip from Santa Barbara to Imperial Beach

This is the last week of my trip. The next stop is San Diego. It's a city on the Pacific coast of California known for its beaches, parks and warm climate. I went to San Diego Museum Of Art, where which is a fine arts museum. The museum has a variety of collections, I am psyched to introduce all of the collections. If you are interested in arts, you must spend time there. 



Next, I rode to San Diego Zoo, where is a famous zoo in America. There are many animals in it. You can see the animal from tropical zone to frigid zone. I'm impressed by the giant panda, they are so lovely. San Diego Zoo is one of four zoos in the America which have giant pandas on display. and it is the most successful in terms of panda reproduction.






Finally, I rode to Imperial Beach,  the destination of my bike trip. It's beautiful and full of many tourists. You can swim, surf and try some activities here. I swam in the water, and it's really comfortable. Later. I wandered along the beachside, feeling the breeze on my face. How relaxing the trip was!





I spent one week finishing my bike trip. It's a wonderful experience and memories. This is my first time have a bike trip on my own. I learned how to use the map and how to fix the bike,etc. I achieved my goal and gained a sense of accomplishment in the trip.

Third week from Crescent City to Santa Barbara

How time flies! This is our third bike trip. We have been to many gorgeous places, and now we continue our trip.I rode for a long time from Crescent City to San Francisco, where Ive always really wanted to visit one day. Finally, I have the chance to visit, and it is by my bike. How amazing! I think I set a PR today because I achieved my goal, and I rode the most more miles than before. I am really on  cloud nine now.



The landmark of San Francisco is the Golden Gate Bridge because many tourists go to San Francisco for seeing to see the Golden Gate Bridge. It's awesome, I haven't seen the such a spectacular bridge before. The bridge is also popular with pedestrians and bicyclists. I rode their my bikes on the bridge, feeling the breeze on my face. It's a wonderful bike trip!

Later, I rode to Chinatown. Chinatown in San Francisco is big-scaled in that many Asian people live in there. I ate a variety of food and experienced Chinese shops and culture. San Francisco is a dynamic city, people here are friendly and hospitable. I think it's the most lovely loveliest city in America.



Tomorrow The next day, I rode to Fisherman's Wharf. It'a popular attractions people want to visit. I found many seafood restaurants there. I also had a wonderful lunch. It's dungeness crab, which is famous in Fisherman's Wharf. It's delicious and fresh, and it's pleasing to my palate. How a wonderful taste!







After visiting San Francisco, the next stop is Santa Barbara. I kept riding and enjoying the view. Suddenly, I rammed into a big rock and I got a flat tire. How poor I am Poor me! I was down in the dumps and needed to stop to fix it. After a some tough work, I finally fixed it and kept going on my bike trip. I rode to El Capitán State Beach, where is a perfect place for swimming, fishing, surfing, picnicking and camping. Its moderate water and beautiful scene are attractive to me.



I have been to many places this week, seeing many spectacular attraction scene and experiencing different culture. It's really a wonderful trip I have never had before.

Bike trip on Pacific Coast ~ Third week~

Bike trip on Pacific Coast ~ Third week~

My third week began from in Crescent City. I was excited because of the beautiful weather . First, I went to the San Francisco. There is That was my favorite place in my bike trip because it has a great sunset and city. I met great guys at the beach and we got drunk by midnight.









The next day, I departed in from San Francisco. I pumped the pedals fast as much as I could because a huge hurricane was coming to Santa Barbara, which is my next destination. Somehow, I arrived there before a huge hurricane came to there but I had a sore muscles due to my hard work. I drank too much beer, which is like the Popeye for me, to cure my sore muscles at night. I accidentally randomly met some people in the bar and we enjoyed drinking together.

The next day, I found the an article in the local paper which said that I had made a record for how much beer a person can drink per hour. I didn't remember that but I might have taken part in kind of tournament and fortunately I have a lot of money  now. However, I don't know why I have that. This week was too crazy for me.  

Second week biking trip

  It's a new week, and I started my biking trip in _the_ second week. I got up early on  Monday morning, and I felt out of it. However, I tried to encourage myself and restart the journey.
I rode the bike from Astoria to Florence, ___ riding along the beach was comfortable. And I kept riding to Florence American Cemetry and Memorial .

Florence American Cemetry and Memorial

  This is such a beautiful place and very well maintained. The monuments alone are
stunning. And I stayed in Florence for two days. Later I rode to Crescent city, and it could also called Big Easy. Crescent city has some of the most unique and beautiful architecture in the world.



  Crescent city is full of fun attractions and things to do. No matter ___ you want to look to spend a relaxing day at the beach or take in some history or experience some outdoor adventure, you will find it all in Crescent city.

  First, I went to to  South beach, and I was psyched ___ the surf. It's popular with surfers, families and nature lovers alike. I also swam and took a long walk along the beach. With its calm waters and sandy beach, I was tickled because I hunted for many sand dollars.


sand dollars

south beach

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Bike trip on Pacific Coast ~ Second week~

Bike trip on ___the Pacific Coast ~ Second week~

This week, I went to Florence from Astoria. Fortunately, It was sunny everyday. There is __ very famous beach called Scenic beach in OR. Unfortunately, this day was a little bit cold but I am pumped up seeing big weals whales. As the local resident said, this accident was very rare at this beach (?). I thought I might have a luck on the beach.








___The next day, I left in Florence and went to Crescent City in CA. I continued to travel but ___a weather was too bad on the way to Crescent City. It made me bitter. Finally, I arrived at the Point St. George in Crescent City. Since I visited there after __a heavy squall, I enjoyed a very clear landscape of this beach.


Tatsuya


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Bike trip on Pacific Coast ~ First week~

Bike trip on Pacific Coast ~ First week~

I started to travel with my cool bicycle on ____the Pacific Coast from Vancouver in Canada to Border Field State Park in Califolrnia. ____(On) The first week, I planed to go from Vancouver to Astoria with watching seeing beautiful beachs__.



____(On) The first day of this week, I went to the sunset beach in Vanouver.This beach is more beautiful than ___________ I have seen saw before. After all Finally, I stayed there for two days since there is very beautiful place.




Then I visited the Alki beach in Seattle on the third day. The conbinations of beach and sunset is awesome.



Finally, I arrived at the Cannon beach end of the week. This beach especially has the {big rock} and ___the very beautiful sunset, and I may never forget the taste of beer with sunset there.



Tatsuya

Thanks for your post - it is very thorough and thoughtful! Don't forget to add the words we discussed on Monday, as well as your name.

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Kate 

First week from Vancouver to Astoria

  You know, how interesting I am. I really excited to start the bike trip with my friend. We are on a bike trip along the Pacific Coast. We started from the Sunset beach in Vancouver.With its moderate climate and extensive network of bike paths, Vancouver is an ideal place for biking. This is why we choose it for our start. When I biked along the Sunset Beach, I felt the mild breeze and experienced the awesome sunset. After biking, we found a hotel to stay ___. ____ Last day, we continued our path, and passed a number of museums, including Science World and Vancouver Maritime Museum.
 Sunset Beach

Science World 
Vancouver Maritime Museum

On the third day, we pedaled on the pedals relentlessly, and our next stop was Alki beach park in Seattle. There were many people riding here, and we also had a delightful time riding here.

 Alki beach park

We spent three day there, and the destination of first week is Cannon beach in Astoria.
Cannon beach

Thanks for your post - beautiful pictures! Don't forget to add the words we discussed on Monday. Also, try to create a more captivating introduction and conclusion!

My corrections:
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Blue words = problem of vocabulary
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Kate 

Purple words = the word new add