Wednesday, August 5, 2015

Second week biking trip

  It's a new week, and I started my biking trip in _the_ second week. I got up early on  Monday morning, and I felt out of it. However, I tried to encourage myself and restart the journey.
I rode the bike from Astoria to Florence, ___ riding along the beach was comfortable. And I kept riding to Florence American Cemetry and Memorial .


Florence American Cemetry and Memorial

  This is such a beautiful place and very well maintained. The monuments alone are

stunning. And I stayed in Florence for two days. Later I rode to Crescent city, and it could also called Big Easy. Crescent city has some of the most unique and beautiful architecture in the world.



  Crescent city is full of fun attractions and things to do. No matter ___ you want to look to spend a relaxing day at the beach or take in some history or experience some outdoor adventure, you will find it all in Crescent city.

  First, I went to to  South beach, and I was psyched ___ the surf. It's popular with surfers, families and nature lovers alike. I also swam and took a long walk along the beach. With its calm waters and sandy beach, I was tickled because I hunted for many sand dollars.


sand dollars

south beach

My corrections:
Red words = delete
Blue words = problem of vocabulary
Green words = problem of tense, form, or spelling
Underlined = problem of capitalization
________ = add word(s)
{Brackets} = reorder, reorganize, or reword

Let me know if you have any questions!

Kate 

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