Bike trip on Pacific Coast ~ Second week~

Bike trip on ___the Pacific Coast ~ Second week~

This week, I went to Florence from Astoria. Fortunately, It was sunny everyday. There is __ very famous beach called Scenic beach in OR. Unfortunately, this day was a little bit cold but I am pumped up seeing big weals whales. As the local resident said, this accident was very rare at this beach (?). I thought I might have a luck on the beach.








___The next day, I left in Florence and went to Crescent City in CA. I continued to travel but ___a weather was too bad on the way to Crescent City. It made me bitter. Finally, I arrived at the Point St. George in Crescent City. Since I visited there after __a heavy squall, I enjoyed a very clear landscape of this beach.


Tatsuya


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Kate